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These look great bud! You're developing a great style here with your line work. The last piece looks especially good. I notice a lot of these seem kind of skewed. Might I ask, are you drawing at an angle? If so, I would suggest looking at the image straight on. I you are using a drafting table. It's as simple as raising the table up a few notches. I used to have a similar problem when I was drawing. Keep posting man. I really enjoy seeing growth.

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Awesome. I'll add to Joe's comment, you're definitely developing as an artist. Your anatomy is looking much better. I like the way you're connecting the pecs to his deltoids.
Try using the circle and cross pattern when you draw out their faces, so as to ensure your eyes, nose and mouth are all evenly placed and not skewed. It does look like you were drawing these at an angle. With the circle and cross pattern (which is something I myself still use from time to time, especially with straight forward shots), it will ensure you don't stumble onto this problem again.

I swiped this from the net, just to show you an example of what I do when I draw heads in certain angles.

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Really good to see your improvements brother. emoticon Keep posting!
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